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Echoes From The Fire's avatar

The long distance of time and space is such a cool line

School of Blue's avatar

So glad you liked it!

David Kirkby's avatar

Oh yes...

This is so true, Richard. My poem "Shaman" was inspired by a very similar thought. All our DNA came from somewhere. We are all the result of those who came before us, and you don't have to go back all that far, really, by the years nature reckons, to find your hunter gatherer forebears.

Living with current hunter gatherers, out in the desert here, made me think of this often.

Best Wishes - Dave :)

School of Blue's avatar

Thanks, Dave. When I first discovered your writing, I was really taken with your experiences in the desert and with the people there. As you say, we don’t have to go back that far to find our roots. Knowing this, means a lot for our place in history.

Ray Sweatman's avatar

Such a great flow of imagery

Trish Vanson's avatar

I love this! From tippy-toeing at the window to the recognition and claiming of their power.

School of Blue's avatar

Thanks, Trish